Writing a sex scene can be scary. Is it believable? Is it possible? Is it hot? Will it end up winning the Bad Sex Award, marking its author forever as someone who has used the phrase “triumphant phallus?”
That’s where I come in.
As the author of multiple “ravishing” and “tumultuous” books with “liberal dollops of flirtation and kinky sex,” I’m here to help with in-line comments and end notes aimed at taking your sex scene all the way to home base.
$75 per scene, for scenes up to 1,500 words/5 pages double spaced. If you’ve got something longer than that, reach out for a quote.
From folks who should know:
“If you’re worried about your erotic prose being clumsy, corny, cliche, or un-sexy in any way, Lara can help you bring a flush in your readers’ cheek while staying true your own writer’s voice.”
“Lara’s critiques are definitely about the sex scenes but also help identify opportunities to make the work stronger, from the description to the characters and the ways those things interact in text. Highly recommended.”
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Lara Elena Donnelly 